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She is the mascot of this site :aww: koshinko.com/

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Neko-No-Te Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, she's so beautiful! :iconkonataplz:
Keep up that amazing work!
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CelesteCorinne Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Photographer
I think this looks great sweetie. Nice job! 
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TanEgg Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It's really good but I have a question. What is she holding?
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ximbixill Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She is holding spoon of omelette rice ..stuff  :aww:
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TanEgg Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ooh yummy!
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SandySandi Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
The way she's dressed with that apron reminds me of Ren from DearS. Overall, it's so cue.
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NoxCaos Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Great! I like the bow on her head lol))
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Warmi-warst Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
very gently ^^
I love her legs, her long hair (I wish you too forever long lovely hair). this romantic <3 And her old hand xD
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doozle-lange Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Excellent depth perception with the right arm/hand.  The spoon comes out of the page. I agree with nubblebubble123 What I see is lack of texture in the apron and stockings.  I'm not an artist but a photographer,  what I can't find is the focus of the light for the picture.  what direction?  Above? In front or sides?  Multiple sources?  I would have 'bounced' the light from top to bottom, softly.  not dramatic.  lighting her face/hand then soft shadows down her apron, legs, and floor. 
sorry to be critical this time... This one is very very good.  Gently pushing you, my friend. 
I have seen the work you posted on this one.  ps six fingers would have been cute.  :D 
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ximbixill Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But you're right :aww: I still have problems with the lighting ^^; and shading . *I need more practice*
 Maybe it's harder when I don't have background and I should make a picture.. without a sightly light focus . 
The picture probably will be edited as a banner, header on a website ^^ . And with a hard light focus and shadows .. this would not look good on a banner.
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doozle-lange Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that makes sense to have a neutral (kind of) focus. to edit as a banner or something other than a pose or portrait.  besides, I didn't know what the commission desired. 
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ximbixill Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:aww: but I should change my coloring.. because.. for example the hair have some ..weird light ... and looks like the hair gets some focus from back or.. I don't know ><
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nubblebubble123 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
if i was going to give feedback i'd just say that it lacks shadow on the apron but overall this is a wonderful piece nice work!
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ximbixill Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :aww:
I should practice shading.. aprons and white things ><" .
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nubblebubble123 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np! it happens we get so preoccupied and there's things we procrastinate on so alls good :3
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DawnOfSinz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kawaii~ It makes me really hungry if you know what i mean :3
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So Adorable! Awesome!
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FallOutDog Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is awesome!!
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